Hello, this week we did sentences stakers we watch a video called Inner thought and we had chooses a bit to write about I chooses number 4.
Here's my work.
Paul's brain wanted to walk past all the fun shops, the heart wanted Paul to quit his job in the office so he could enjoy his life. His brain loved to be careful so that Paul would not hurt himself, ( his brain loved his daily habits [ So that nothing can go wrong. Paul’s heart loved to party all day but Paul's, know it all, brain just had worries. Paul’s mind thought fun is something dangerous, being boring can be dangerous all so. Flippity flop, flippity flop, flippity flop. Paul’s mind was trying to open the door, the brain loved paul sitting in the same chair, the same building, the same people around him, the same computer and the same work time. |
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