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Friday 12 June 2020

La Luna/ Moon

The first week for writing we did La Luna which means moon. The characters were grandad, Luca and Dad.

Here's the story.


 La Luna/ Moon

  Title: A present.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          



Luca was in a boat at night with his grandad and Dad. Lucas looked at his grandad and Dad they both looked at Lucas like he won the Lottery. Then his grandad was holding something behind his back. What is Lucas wondering what he is doing in the middle of the sea? He sees nothing except his grandpa and dad in the middle of the sea. He’s dad is holding a light. When Lucas was on his way to the middle of the sea, he had only seen the sun set going down. It was like a big flame cooling down by jumping in the sea. Grandad pulled out from his back a sailor hat, Lucas has alway wanted a sailors hat. Dad and grandad were happy but then dad put the hat on his head. Grandad and dad started touching his hat and moving it and fighting over it. Should he stop them from fighting over the hat? They were even worse than a Zoo of animals grabbing a hat, they were tilting it side to side. How should He politely say please stop? Then something started glowing and rising out from the sea.






Tittle: The long wait


( Then something started glowing and raised out from the sea.)


It was a big and strong light, It was really big. It looked like a giant ball that was rising up from the sky, it was the full moon. How did his dad and grandad know about this place? It's the best spot to see the big moon.

Lcaus was so shocked that his grandpa and dad knew about this place all along. Then they waited until dad told him to stand back. What is his dad doing? Lucas' dad was pulling out something big. It was a ladder for him to go up to the moon. His dad pointed his hand at Lucas and pointed up to the moon. Should I climb up to the moon or stay here?


                                                                                                                                                                                              











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